tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8081959.post2790235961714682186..comments2023-09-18T06:23:06.811-03:00Comments on Days: 2004-2012: Robert DuncanCarol Petershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04939321886306936715noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8081959.post-75846866063382535482010-03-19T03:15:57.088-03:002010-03-19T03:15:57.088-03:00The lion leads one down the path. The full meaning...The lion leads one down the path. The full meaning of this poem has not revealed itself to me, but I love the immediacy; lioness of the approach.Diane Dehlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13178263734982687383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8081959.post-23859660232602266222010-03-17T18:48:43.520-03:002010-03-17T18:48:43.520-03:00Yes, I like the blurring, too -- "lion/line&q...Yes, I like the blurring, too -- "lion/line" and the polysemy of "certain." I don't have an overall sense of the poem yet, still readingCarol Petershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04939321886306936715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8081959.post-12657156381805933692010-03-17T18:42:58.968-03:002010-03-17T18:42:58.968-03:00I like "the certain guard", the progress...I like "the certain guard", the progressions in usage (shed, shed-roof), the nouns that are both visible/visual and not. A shimmering or blurring at the border...? Clarity and not. Nakedness or not?Madge McKeithenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10469731317396260335noreply@blogger.com